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MUST BE HEAVEN

I can't believe
Those moments in that place
Eyes lied? Was I in space?

To see cloud higher than stars,
It is a puzzle, neither disco nor in bars

It must be dream, cloud was red
I felt it was over the head

Other things were strange too,
Stars were blue
And only two
Can it be true?

I was sure they were mine
I felt over cloud nine

It was so high as I mention
Still attracted all attention.

Even that high but I reach it,

As it has not happened ever
Couldn't touch that cloud never
No wonder I am still proud
No one has touched that cloud 

So beautiful
Dose the heaven colored much?
Or me stupid to think in such?


I don't care who believe it
I saw it and I did live it
Unluckily
Time was short had to leave it


2010-04-24 14:37
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2010-04-24 14:54
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hmm, some corrections..
really more fullfilled
but too much of word "cloud", maybe posible to lessen, or to change smth about it.

really, i am surprised how so simple, too simple phrases can be sensitive, joyfull and creating smile.

this time 3++++++++
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